Majestic Fantasist

Astoria- Azael stood before her, looking a little annoyed as the man that had followed him introduced himself. “I am Gerain. Welcome to the sanctuary of The First.” said the ...

(oops! I think we posted at the same time! I will fix mine!) Astoria- Astoria awoke on the ground. Tadhg was siting over her, and Azael was no where in ...

Astoria- Astoria stepped into the flowing line of water, letting it flow over her body. She scrubbed slowly at her clothes and skin, wiping away the sandy remains while relishing ...

Astoria- Tadhg’s feet began to appear in the ceiling, sprouting from the same place that Astoria had fallen from. Soon he was on the ground near her, wiping the sand ...

Astoria- Astoria grabbed the rope and tied it cautiously around her waist, making sure it secure. “You’re actually going to do that?” Tadhg asked, watching her inch toward the sand. ...

Astoria- “Why don’t you give him some water?” Astoria asked, clasping the water bottle tight in her hand. “Because, I gave most of my water to you.” Azeal said, still ...

Astoria- Clenching the bottle tightly between her teeth – she was not going to let that fall- Astoria edged slowly over the side of the cliff. The rocks were rough ...

I’m impressed by your ability to make something that might seem cliché (wizards with runes and talking wolves) original. It’s hard to critique after only reading the prologue, so I ...

Astoria- Completely ignoring the man, Astoria flopped to the ground and devoured the meat. It was hard and chewy, but miraculously still had a hint of salty taste. When it ...

Astoria- Carefully Astoria climbed through the jumble of black sooty rocks, trying to noiselessly reach the small clearing. A man was perched upon a rock on the edge of the ...

Me too!!! Name: Astoria Gender: Female Age: 19 Appearance:dirty blonde hair, pale skin, dark eyes. History: Once upon a time Astoria was a thief, stealing from the innocent to keep ...

Name: Roxana (f) Age: 19 Race: Human Magic: None Appearance: Weapon: Long curving sword Personality: Roxana is sarcastic, and unwilling to let anyone get to know her. Basically she knows ...

Hello, lakegirls! =D First, I suggest that you space out your story! Lots of people won't read it just because the clumped paragraphs make it look like there is a ...

Hi there! =D I like where you are going with this, and it seems like it will be a very exciting story! I just hope you plan on explaining more ...

hey, AWritersFantasy! well, this was pretty good, I loved the ending. It was a total surprise when they ended up going to the moon. Caught me off guard! So, I ...